Gregg Nation needs to get fired.Mr. Nation was profiled last month in the New York Times because he's the man responsible for keeping track of all the comings and goings on Lost; he's the script coordinator (and, also, a co-producer). Mr. Nation has an entire Word document devoted to this task and, were he to print it out, the file would apparently rival War and Peace for pages. The article in the Times paints him as one of those people who have a dream job--the only thing he really has to do is watch Lost for a living and keep track of it. Millions of people do that every week, but Mr. Nation is the only one getting paid for it.
Well, apparently he missed a few episodes. Because "The Life and Death of Jeremy Bentham" played fast and loose with the chronology of the show and completely sullied what was otherwise a pretty fascinating episode. Truncated, forced and, ultimately, very damaging to many truths we've already established, this is one of the episodes that Lost-haters could have a field day with. I don't think I'm completely around the bend in saying that "Life and Death" seriously hurt the fabric of the show.
And so, Gregg Nation needs to be fired.
Just to backtrack: we know that at the end of season three (and at the beginning of the season four finale), Jack had been fired from his job at the hospital and was living in relative squalor in a room strewn with maps and old Oceanic plane tickets; he had taken up the hobby of flying around the world praying for a mid-air collision. We also know that when Jack showed Kate the obituary for "Jeremy Bentham" she recoiled in anger. Said Kate: "why would I go to the funeral," and, "when he came to me, and I heard what he had to say, I knew he was crazy."
Here, you can watch it all for yourself:
Great stuff.
And yet tonight, it all got undone. "The Life and Death of Jeremy Bentham" would have us all believe that Locke talked to Jack in the hospital following his car accident (an amazing scene, p.s.), and that almost immediately after, Jack bought his first ticket to Sydney. Then Locke got murdered by Ben (spoiler alert!) and Jack saw the obituary and called Kate. So in the span of, at max, a few weeks, Jack became a crazy drug addict, lost his job, grew a giant beard and flew to Sydney, Singapore and anywhere else he could think of.
Huh?
Meanwhile, Kate went from seeming to feel genuine pity for Locke when he came to see her, to treating the mere thought of him as if he were a relative of Bernie Madoff.
Sayid? Well, Locke found him building houses for some Habitat for Humanity International-like organization in the Dominican Republic. One week he's helping people and doing good, the next he's assassinating some poor slob outside of Hurley's mental hospital.
Need I go on? Okay, I will: How about Walt, who when he came to see Hurley during the season four finale said that Locke had referred to himself as "Jeremy Bentham". And yet tonight, Locke never even mentioned the name "Jeremy Bentham" to Walt. Along the same lines, it didn't sound like Locke told Jack that Ben was off the Island, but when Jack and Ben were standing over the coffin at the end of season four, Jack said he was aware of Ben's post-Island life explicitly because Locke had mentioned him.
Why has it become increasingly hard for Damon Lindelof and Carlton Cuse, who wrote tonight's episode, to keep track of what they've already established? If Lost expects us to follow along with the detailed obsessiveness of a CSI-investigator, why can't we expect the same thing from the people actually creating the show? And what made this all so maddening and frustrating is that all it would have taken was a little fix in the dialogue. Instead of Locke coming off the Island three years later, why couldn't it have been two years? Or two years and six months even. Anything would have made more sense with regards to what has already happened.
The sad part of all this is that "The Life and Death of Jeremy Bentham" was really made up of some fantastic parts. Terry O'Quinn was masterful throughout (Emmy alert!), specifically in his scenes with Lance Reddick, Jorge Garcia, Michael Emerson (natch) and Matthew Fox (double natch). Watching Locke visit each member of The Oceanic Six (sans Sun) was like some bizarre and awesome take on A Christmas Carol with Locke playing the role of "The Ghost of Island Past". Hell, even the reason the show gave for why Walt isn't involved in the trek back to the Island worked fine for me. As Locke said, "he's been through enough." Malcolm David Kelley, we'll see you in another life, brother.
Oh! And Locke actually figured out that Jack was Christian's son... by using common sense. Christian clearly wasn't the father of Sayid or Hurley, so that could only leave Jack. Fabulous reveal!
It's too bad all of those goodies were lost in the wreckage of bad chronology. This isn't like last week, when some fans complained that there weren't any reasons given for Kate abandoning Aaron, Hurley getting out of jail and Sayid ending up in custody. Those questions will be answered, just as sure as this is Lost. I didn't think you had to be above a sixth grade reading level to realize that Lost sets things up and then goes back to show you how they happened at a later date, but apparently you do.
Still, if they answer those questions in the way they filled in some answers tonight, I won't be happy either.
And for that, Gregg Nation should be fired.
Hey there,
ReplyDeleteSo while I do agree with some of your points, you've focused this blog on Greg Nation and with that said, I firstly wanted to comment on that. I read that article in the Times so I know all about the guy and I tend to think that Mr. Nation had little to do with this episode in terms of it's awkward and potentially false chronology. Dissecting the various scenes in which Locke visits various Ocean 6'ers takes away from the bigger question of - what's the point of showing these scenes at all? What do we gain? Furthering that, by confusing the LOST timeline which has previously been established by Nation, wikepedia and countless bloggers, the show writers have made themselves look sloppy.
Aside from that point I found the entire episode, as well as all of Season 5, to be very underwhelming. I fear that the writers have woven so many story lines and plot points that they're now struggling to keep up with what they've built. We're 7 episodes in and all we've seen is how the O-6 got back onto the island, what's been going on with those ON the island, and how Locke has been further "tested" by the island. Sure, we've been given a few more Whidmore kernels and Desmond has shown his face here and there. We now know that Mrs. Hawking is Faraday's mother - but who didn't see that coming? Mysterious Jacob still takes the human form of Christian Shepherd and villainous Ben clearly doesn't know what to do with himself anymore.
Mr. Nation hasn't missed a few episodes - the writers have simply gotten themselves into multiple pot holes that they're now fixing with very lazy and disappointing tactics. You're telling me that Walt, whom understands time travel and can appear out of thing air, is simply not going to come back into the show because, "He's seen enough?" And what about Matthew Abaddon - the mysterious bald man who's shown up in random places always attempting to scare various O-6’ers into coming with him off to some scary place, or to give him information. Were we not set up to think that he could possibly be with Richard Alpert and the island’s Others? His end is justified simply because he's a "guy working for Whidmore?"
I truly believe the writers lack the passion that was apparent in Seasons 1 and 2 because the writing has wavered and is now so formulaic that 15 minutes in a viewer can practically predict the entire episode’s structure. Why did we move forward in last week's episode only for us to move back again in this week's? I'll tell you why. It's because the producers recognize how, dare I say it, boring the show is becoming and therefore insisted last week's episode come before this week's so a big part of the audience didn't drop off. Now that we know our O-6 are on the island, we'll come back to see what happens but do we really care about what's happened in "The Life and Death of Jeremy Bentham?" My 8-ball says, “Mmmm, not so much.”
a few things i agree with that were good: walt being left alone, the christian is jacks dad reveal (PS how come we couldnt figure out that... we all should have been able too right?), locke was good.
ReplyDeletea few things i agree were not good: the jack timeline, the bentham ommision with walt, sayids quick transition.
but i think you need to have a little faith in some things. i know lockes time in the real world is seemingly over and he really hasnt convinced much to come back. but why couldnt what he did start a groundswell with everyone that it did with jack. walt comes to hurley, thats two chances for hurley to change, jack sees kate, two reasons for her to change, plus ben is helping (for better or worse) lockes efforts. i know its hard to have believe in teh writers sometimes, but thats why its called a leap of faith.
it may seem skewed now but stick with it.
Chris – your recap is brilliant. But, you only lightly touched on the most annoying and disappointing casualty of the poor chronological references – to me the part that lost out the most is all the little tid bits that were reveled. Hello, there is a NEW PLANE crashed on the island, there are new survivors, there is an office full of interesting things to be explored, “the pilot” (Frank Lapidus) took off on a boat with some woman (Sun?)!!! There are so many better things to be talking about than the writers mistakes, but alas that's what everyone is noticing. Shame.
ReplyDeletePeople, come on. We all know that Christian is Jack's dad; that wasn't the big deal. The big deal was that Locke was telling Jack that he knew his dad. It was a last ditch effort to prove that there is some post-death life on the Island. Which would explain why Locke is alive, standing in the water post new plane crash.
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Of course you are right... there were plenty of awesomely awesome things in this episode.
ReplyDelete1.) Another plane on the Island... well not on *the* Island, but on the satellite Island that Jack, Sawyer and Kate were taken to in season three (and the same Island were Sawyer and Kate were building a runway...)
2.) Definitely Lapidus and Sun, though why wouldn't Sun go back in time with Jack, Kate and Hurley. And where is Sayid?
3.) Who is Caesar working for and why is Said Taghmaoui so awesome?
4.) Ben f'n murdered Locke!
5.) Widmore is a total bad guy. Hell, they all are.
6.) Also: Locke is still alive. Or, not alive. But whatever it is, he seems a lot less ethereal than either Ghost Claire or Christian.
It is also possible that Jack had already started his flight hopping before Locke arrives at the hospital. He was looking pretty scruffy already.
ReplyDeleteBen of course misleads Locke by insinuating that Jack's ticket buying was a result of Locke's visit, when in fact Jack had been buying tickets and deteriorating for a while now.